客户是外企，发来一封邮件，关于业务上的，可怜我。。。。。！请英语达人大致翻译下，不要很精确，意思差不多就可以了，感谢感谢！

Do we need to put in so much information?  It feels like we’re just tearing out a page from our catalog.

What key messages are we trying to communicate?

Pls make sure these messages pop out to the viewer rather than the view having to read it closely.

Once again, we need to be able to communicate what we want to say in a glace, as opposed to someone sitting down and studying the document.

The cover is good.  That sets up the overall message.  What can we do with the formatting , highlight, text fonts, etc that makes the message jump out?

Dark background and dark letters hides the message.  Perhaps using yellow instead of blue would make it easier to read.

Regardless, fewer the words the better.

[智冲威马 编辑于 2010-12-31 22:04]

无敌了，顿首再谢！非常羡慕英文好的朋友，呵呵。

译的很赞, 高手!

Do we need to put in so much information? It feels like we’re just tearing out a page from our catalog.
我们需要把这么多的信息放进去吗？这个看起来就像是直接从我们的产品目录里撕下来的一页。

What key messages are we trying to communicate?
我们想要沟通的主要意思是什么？

Pls make sure these messages pop out to the viewer rather than the view having to read it closely.
请把这个做成那种消息自己“跳到”读者的眼前的感觉，而不是读者需要自己仔细地去读懂里面的意思。

Once again, we need to be able to communicate what we want to say in a glace, as opposed to someone sitting down and studying the document.
反正，我们需要把我们想表达的意思以一种简洁的方式表达出来，而不是需要读者坐下来仔细研究我们的文档才能搞懂。

The cover is good. That sets up the overall message. What can we do with the formatting , highlight, text fonts, etc that makes the message jump out?
封面不错，把主要的意思交代了。我们要想想选择怎样的格式，例如高亮、字体等等，使要表达的信息有“跳出来”的感觉。

Dark background and dark letters hides the message. Perhaps using yellow instead of blue would make it easier to read.
暗色背景配暗色字符让内容不明显。可能用黄色代替蓝色会更好读一些。

Regardless, fewer the words the better.
总之，言简意赅最好了。

[braveghost 编辑于 2010-12-31 23:42]

PPT切记简明扼要，重点突出，而不是做成一本书，把所有信息都罗列上去。
如果能把PPT的内容控制在5页以内，你就成功了。

非常感谢，朋友！

估计是看了你们准备的PPT啥的给回复的意见：
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内容太繁杂，不够简明扼要；

要突出重点，要想法让观看者一目了然，

深色背景，深色字体看起来不清晰，用黄色替代蓝色可能好点。
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（换言之，你们的PPT做的像手册而不是演示幻灯）